Hi Chris, great work here. However, the journal entries need to correspond to the assigned readings for weeks 9, 10, 11, and 12. Please speak with me after class so that your Q4 Weekly Journals reflect the […]
There wasn’t a place for me to post a comment within your entry pages, so I wanted to write that I thoroughly enjoyed reading your thoughts on the readings thus far; particularly for words like “wondrous”. I feel […]
After reading your three entries, I found your writer’s voice very endearing/genuine. It keeps the reader reading. You raise very important “what if” questions and these questions will help you dive deeply into […]
I think there are interesting threads here that are worth a deeper dive. The journal’s primary focus is to record your thoughts which is an integral component of analysis. You have produced a summary + information garnered from a secondary source, but what is missing is the heart of journalling. I encourage you to probe deeper.