I agree with your response. I believe if the author would’ve added some more background information and added more details from the community, it would’ve made the writing very strong.
I agree with how you graded development and content. If the author would’ve provide more quotes that shows the beliefs of the Flat Earth community, and not just focusing on the discussion boards, they would’ve got […]
For this assignment, I read “Who are the Flat Earthers?” by Richi Barua. The writer did a good job explaining the Flat Earth society and their beliefs. The writer provided historical background about the community […]
I like how you summarize Beauchamp’s analysis on the current Incel community. The community do represent some Western values, but flashes it in a way where it becomes uncomfortable for outsiders.
I agree with your analysis. I also feel like their rage is rooted in their insecurity within themselves. And as a result of their words and beliefs, they are subconsciously pushing potential partners from them.
Zach Beauchamp’s “Our Incel Problem” highlights the highly controversial online community and their shift to radicalism and misogyny. The Involuntary Celibacy, or Incel community was created over 20 years ago, and […]
You did a good job listing all of your privileges and how that may affect and support your research. I also find it interesting that you are taking an outsiders glance to a community that you are apart of.
I really liked how you started taking a look at your community and noticing the differences of the community and yourself from the start. You did a great job listing out your privileges and the privileges of […]
I recently watched a movie on Netflix about the Flat Earth society, and became interested with their beliefs. I chose this community because I wanted to learn more about the communities rationale and why they […]
You are very descriptive in your response which is very good. I also like how Wu was able to follow other people in the forums and started to disclose her illness to her therapist and hopefully loved ones.
I liked how you explained Wu’s ER experience because you have pinpointed that the doctors didn’t take to account the other ways she could have been sick.
I really like your explanation of Wu’s ER experience. I like how you highlighted that the doctors did not recognize that there are other ways that Wu could be sick.
Elise Wu’s “Out Patients” portrays her experience with Factitious Disorder (FD)before and after her “self-diagnosis”. Prior to her self-diagnosis, she battled with the compulsion of seeking medical attention […]
You did a good job observing what goes on in a busy train. Your observations are really accurate and I really like your closing sentence because it is our sad reality.
It is about 12:15 pm as I take a seat in the fourth floor library. The wooden brown tables were filled, as usual, with college students. As I take a seat in front of the long table, I see many rows of other […]
I agree with what you said about the trauma Rosie faced as a child. Actions like that does affect young children in many ways and can later influence them to be apart of compromising situations and/or places.
