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Nice start, Sarah. Remember that the reflection itself should be aimed a particular audience. Think expansively as you revise. Consider the main points on the writing prompt–brainstorming, peer review, research, drafting, and synthesis–and make sure you provide examples from your work that illustrate that points you want to make about them.

This is a good draft, Annie. Remember that it asks you to identify an audience (as opposed to describing the audience you identified and addressed in the essay itself). Develop your examples as much as you can–what else did you discover in peer review? How did you go about findings articles that supported your point? I apply this kind of…[Read more]

Very nice start, Chris. Be sure to include examples to illustrate your claims. What happened, for example, in your peer review process. What changed as a result of it? You can use this strategy for all of the claims you make about your writing process.

Hi Kevin,

This is a good start. As you continue to develop this, keep in mind the individual aspects of the reflection that you can describe. We did a lot of different peer review activities, for example, and we talked about drafting a lot. Be expansive here — include everything that you can think of.

Great start, Gabriela. Keep it up.