I liked how you mentioned about going through the requirement for the assinments. I also, do the same which helps me to organize my parts of the essays and helps me put my thought together.

I really liked how you skip a paragparh and work on the conclusion and get the idea to flow in your essay. I agree how refelctions and peer review help us to clarify thoughts.

I agree with your grading criteria because the author gave very good explanation about Flat Earth community and we got to learn thing about that community.

I liked how you described your opinion about the esaay and mentioned adding qoutes.

I liked how you mentioned that the womens are being hated in the incel platform. Also, how people can show their true colors on the online community.

I liked how you compared the essay with the shooting of New Zealand and showed your opinion about the incel group members.

I really liked how you talked about age and race as an insider.

I really liked how you want we should have gun control. I think you really thought out of the box and showed your opinion on something interesting.

I really liked how you included your opinion about Wu’s experince and used expressions to show your reactions. It was very thoughtful and also helpful to the readers to understanf the initial react.

I liked how you talked about the audience being an insider in the essay according to Wu and how she choses her community to potray her job that she does in the society.

I can relate the fact that how library is prohibited for food or any kind of beverages since I have seen the same. However, so many student sneak the food in their bag and eat inside. I really liked how you […]

I really liked that you noticed the man how he walked and shouted over his phone. Also you gave the details what was he talking about and mentioned it.

I liked how you used the tone to describe the situation how the man’s credit cards runs up and earn their wage for the night.