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Hi your topic is very interesting to me and isnt talked about often or at all. Your sources seem just, and the idea of using social media posts as sources seems like it may be a good idea because of the amount of […]

Hi Alice the report on your research is really well done and thought out. The way you are thinking about using your sources within the paper seems like a good way to properly discuss your topic and to bring your […]

This topic goes hand in hand with so many others and they need to be adressed. Often thing slike this can lead out of hand and lead to things like school shootings, suicide, or maybe even worse. Mentally scaring […]

Hey Haseeb, awesome topic to choose. I thought about choosing a version of the same topic but more focusing on what the system does to kids mentality often leading them to depression. This is a very important […]

Hi Ayesha I really liked how you talked about writing being a form of expression. I personally believe that writing is one of the most important and best form of self expression, and people tend to underestimate […]

Hey Armani freewriting is something that I also love to do. I also love the fact that you organized everything before the draft and the final essay. I attempted to but ended up almost free writing it and then […]

I think your research paper topic question is a very good one and is definetly worth exploring. I am personally writing about school shootings. So this is linked to mine to a degree. I am also interested in ways […]