The Public School system in the United States is broken in many ways; sadly, this issue doesn’t have deserved. Whenever I think of the future generations, I feel terrible; it is not good for us now, imagine it for […]

Hi Richard,

I did not know about broken window and zero tolerance policing. I think it will be interesting to compare and contrast these two policies. I wonder what other types of policing are out there. What […]

Hi Erezana!

Reading your sources made me think of when my father assigned me to write an essay when I was little about how television and video games effect children’s brains. I remember finding a lot of pros […]

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This is very relevant to today type of topic you have chosen, I am very interested in learning more about this. Good luck!

Nice job on the amount of work done into researching this topic, bullying is a very serious thing to research about. Good luck!

You have an excellent range of sources. Additionally, you have researched your sources very well and seem to have a grip on your research. I appreciate you putting so much effort into this topic. Best of luck on […]

I like how you are using a large number of resources to write your essay. I really like how you analyzed each of your sources to find out the specific information you found important for the construction of your […]

I find your topic to be really interesting! Your source, “The Problem With American Education” by Marvin C. Zastrow was particularly interesting due to the way it addressed educational inequity through e […]

I find your topic very interesting since not a lot of people talk about it. You did a great job at finding the sources. Good luck!