I love the tone of this essay, but you should add a paragraph that identifies the audience for this reflection. It seems very familiar…like it’s for other students that might be writing their first research papers. Also, can you mention something about your drafting process, synthesis of information and peer-review. These are all required in the…[Read more]

I’d also like to hear more about the audience for this reflection. I know that your model essay was in a publication that targeted teachers and other educators. I’m not sure who “research essay writers” is in the above mention. Is it other college students? Professionals? etc. Just clarify that a bit. Also, I’d like to hear something about…[Read more]

Strong reflection on the topic for your essay and very nice writing, generally speaking. You mention the peer review process, but don’t say much about drafting, synthesis, or how you expanded your topic from 21 Savage to include Dreamers with other sources. In addition, you need to identify a specific audience for this reflection. Who are you…[Read more]

This is a great start. You’ve defined your audience and the way that audience influences the writing for the reflection. And, the commentary on the peer review process was interesting. You could expand on your discussion of drafting and include some examples from your own work. For example, I noticed that there was substantial shift in tone from…[Read more]