This essay is about the online K-pop community and how they contributed to the death of a K-pop idol named Sulli. I think I would give this essay a 90% overall rating. I feel as though the author did a good enough […]
The author Zack Beauchamp goes into great detail describing the demographic that the incel community is composed of. What I find interesting is that many of the people in the incel community are not monsters that […]
I think you did a good job describing how vital money is in the trading community and how much of a privilege you gain in this community simply by having easier access to it.
I enjoyed how you connected your personal background with the topic you chose. I think you did a great job listing the ways your background influences your views on the topic of Bernie and other political things.
I usually don’t think about the privileges I have but there are some things in my life that I suppose give me privilege. One of these things is my family. There are many people out there who don’t have parents or […]
I think it was a good idea to mention how the doctor kept trying to plug his books. It gave off the impression that it was incredibly difficult to find genuinely useful information for treatment of her condition […]
I like how you brought up Elise creating vernacular to describe the online communities. I feel like this was an important detail as it helps the reader to get into her mindset as she learns about these communities.
Elise Wu starts her essay by introducing us to her “mental condition” in which she fakes and/or exaggerates illness in order to receive medical care and attention. From here, she then mentions how she found an […]
I enjoyed how you mentioned the differences in the usual public commute. It was really interesting to see details, like how more people are wearing masks, and how the trains were recently disinfected. It really […]
Today I decided to observe the City College NAC center. In particular I observed the rotunda area above the escalator entrance, one of City College’s busiest areas. What I noticed is that a lot of students were […]
This article tells a really interesting story about a woman’s rise to the “top”. Roselyn Keo (known as “Rosie”) starts off from a humble beginning working at a diner to help her grandparents to making hundreds of […]
I like how you brought up how today, a lot of issues still remain. I think that is a very important thing to acknowledge when reading this essay written in the 1960’s. It’s crazy how even today we still face […]
I like how you mentioned how everyone regardless of race has a family to take care of. I think its good to bring up how we all have similar beliefs deep down, despite our different outside appearances. More […]
1. There is a lot of cultural information present in James Baldwin’s essay. The usage of the N-word in the essay is symbolic of the brutal systems of racism present at the time and a system of which the […]
