I very much agreed with you when you mentioned how your mind should be at peace when writing just because distractions would never make the writing good, I forgot about this piece in the article until I read your post.

I like how you included your own experience in writing a first draft. I do agree that the main idea of the article was straight forward and clear. However, what might have been something you didn’t really catch u […]

I understand your confusion towards the passage and I hope that by your second reading it would have made more sense to you. I like how this is a summary of the passage but I wanna hear more about your feelings […]

First things first, I love the detail you put into this. You included color tiles and even the scents that came to you. The beginning was necessary so that the reader understood how observant you were being so I […]

I love the location that you picked considering that I chose to right about my church as well. I liked how you distinguished the difference between gospel and worldly music and how it made you feel. However, I […]

I like how you covered all the assignment questions all in one paragraph in a non direct way. I feel like that’s the way answers should be given in paragraphs not just straightforward. I agree with the idea that t […]

I liked how you formed your paragraphs into three to point out where each answer to the three questions are and where we can find them. I also like the idea that the author uses dramatic words to describe Solange […]

I thought it was clever of you to introduce the article in detail to its main plot. Your questions connect very well with the article and the mind of a fieldworker.

I found it interesting how you mentioned the grammatical errors that were fixed in the text. I didn’t pay much mind to it until you said it and now I wonder if it was also done on purpose. Your questions seemed v […]

I found myself agreeing with you tremendously on your second paragraph. I also found the date of the speech interesting and quit different. I understood what you believe this article was about right away thanks to […]

I love the way you used your citation to support the “main idea” of the article. Not only that, you explained it and connected the two very well. I’m also a huge fan of your second paragraph and I agree one hundr […]