I think my narrative starts getting strong when I start talking about how my literacy journey started little by little because I think will give the readers a better understanding of the essay. Like what their expectations from this essay. I do like most about it the part that I started talking about my literacy journey With my mom. When I was writing about this part I can imagine myself at the moment, even though the moment I wrote about I was young at the time. Don’t remember. I fairly critique it at the beginning of my essay because I think is very informal, and not sure about the audience that I can reach to them or not. And about the middle of the essay, I am Not feeling good about it. I think I am moving from my focus question. I am not done yet with my essay. I like feedback on grammar and sentence structure.
