While reading this essay, one idea that interests me is how the author organized her thoughts. Her introduction sounded like the beginning of a story and she knew exactly what she wanted to talk about. While reading her intro I thought that this essay would explain her college experience and help other people get by with their first enc…[Read more]
I’ve decided that my research question will be “How does the United States make it difficult for Immigrants to move on with their lives and succeed?”. Based on some research I’ve looked into, these days the Tru […]
Hi Miranda! I like the choice you made for your topic and your research question is very good. Your feelings are valid and you look you’re on the right track with your research. I’m also focusing my research on […]
Hi Jiajie! I like your choice for your topic I think its very interesting and its definitely something that should be looked into more. Bullying is a serious topic that gets overlooked but it does affect our youth […]
I’ve decided to continue my research with immigration because this topic is very important to me. Especially with the current political climate I want to be able to research a topic that affects many people. I’m […]
I agree with your first point! writing is a way of communicating with others to “express your ideas and conclusions toward certain things”. I also mentioned how writing lets you organize your thoughts and helps […]
Hi! I agree with your point of “rhetorical analysis is the best factor that can improve the understanding of the essay”. this assignment really allowed us to push ourselves into completing a writing in a way that […]
I believe that writing is ones way to express their thoughts, but also organizing them. when you have a lot on your mind, writing is a great way to let it all out. with this class i’ve learned that writing is more […]
