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I am very interested in your research questions. It is horrible that school gun cases happen in the US, but still many of them happen. The way to stop gun cases from happening is to lead more kids in education to […]

I like the research question about depression. In adolescence, having depression is becoming more common for students. Many people with depression choose to end their lives because they can’t take the depression […]

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I agree with you that “the capacity to show your purpose to the audience, so they can know what you are trying to say after they read your work” I think it is an essential element of a good piece of writing. I […]