I did not know about broken window and zero tolerance policing. I think it will be interesting to compare and contrast these two policies. I wonder what other types of policing are out there. What […]
Reading your sources made me think of when my father assigned me to write an essay when I was little about how television and video games effect children’s brains. I remember finding a lot of pros […]
When the author mentions how discussing what is read from a scholarly article with your professor and peers can expand one’s thinking and solidify one’s stance, I thought of how we post on the forum and comment on each other’s responses. Although we work virtually because of COVID, we still find a way to discuss with one another. When the autho…[Read more]
We really are living in a crazy time. It is also interesting to see what kind of conspiracies have developed because of this pandemic. I have heard people say that the government planned to release […]
First of all, I love your topic. I find it so incredibly important to criticize systems like these. For far too long, people have been let down by these systems put in place that are supposed to […]
I read somewhere that what makes communities safe is not more police, but more resources. This is why heavily policed neighborhoods with poor black people are more crime ridden than wealthy white […]
My parents separated when I was 9. For me personally, I was happy, because they had a very abusive relationship. However, because I was never really exposed to a healthy dynamic when it comes to […]
I am in a Global Climate Change class this semester. This class has made me become even more aware of environmental problems, and grown even more interested in the subject. It is so upsetting to […]
Like our first essay, my topic for this essay will be related to homelessness. I felt inspired by the sources I read when composing my first essay and wanted to do even more research. I especially want to find […]
I love to freewrite as well. I agree that what we are learning is challenging us to better our writing and is also different from how I am used to writing. Your outline idea Is cool, I think I also […]
I agree with you, I feel like brainstorming is a huge part of the writing process. After receiving feedback from my peers and the professor on my draft, I also realized how bad my analysis was, […]
I believe that writing is an important form of expression. It is almost everlasting, as we are able to read people’s writings from the beginning of time and apply it to whatever we want in our time. I believe t […]