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Hi Marat, I think it’s great that you are eliminating sources and deciding what sources to use based on the information content it provides to your essay. I also really liked how you kind of summarized each of the […]

Hi Elena, good sources you have so far! As for the source that you are currently debating, I think you should use it if it brings new information that your other sources don’t provide and if it would benefit your […]

With divorce rates on the rise, I’m glad your focusing and diving into how divorce impacts the children. I know that divorce has long-term effects on the children, and I’m interested to learn what are the possible […]

Bullying is an important issue that is prevalent in a school setting, and no matter how much we spread anti-stop bullying messages, unfortunately, bullying is still going on. I’m interested to learn about what are […]

I think that it is great that you’re shedding a light on the issue of rape and your research question is unique considering how I’ve never heard of someone approaching the topic of rape this way. However, I do […]

I’m really glad your exploring this topic, especially a topic that all if not many of us can relate to. I agree that college is a very traditional step that everybody thinks that everybody should do after […]

I agree with your method and the idea that feedback is essential to make an essay better. I had readers who read my essay and they helped me realize that the structure you did in your 1st draft, was to redundant […]

I also agree with the fact that writing something like a rhetorical analysis does leave one person drained because when writing a rhetorical analysis essay, it’s such an intricate process of analyzing and […]