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Hi Marat, I am glad that you have found good sources from different sides. Also, you have explained why your sources are reliable and described a little bit about these sources. In your last paragraph, you have […]

Hi Elena, You have mentioned where you found your sources and why these sources are reliable. Also, you have a lot of good sources to gather a lot of information. I am glad that you didn’t miss anything about your […]

Hi Alexa, your essay topic is always a serious issue in the U.S. I think you have done good research. But I want to remind you that you are missing to provide your essay model link that will help us to see how […]

Hi Elena, It seems like you have done great research. You know what you are doing. I saw that you have a lot of resources that will help you to boost your research. I liked your writing style. Everything is very […]

Hi Alice, first of all, I want to say that you are so smart. You may be thinking why I said that. The reason behind this is you added two topics together that are related to each other. So, it will be easy for you […]

Hi Edward, I think you choose a very interesting topic. When I was a senior in high school, I was undecided about starting college for my career. Because some students make more money without going to college. But […]

Hi! Alexa. First of all, I loved your first line. Writing is a medium where we express our thoughts. It was a great challenge for us to write this essay. But different people have different strategies and we are […]

Haseeb I agree with you. I think writing is a medium in which people can express themselves openly in whatever way they want. I think your strategy is so strong. You explained from the beginning how you start to […]