Romance, Sex, Gender Appeal: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pryodsKPO-WB3lf1M5gGHG7wqAI3UOfJF4FHkdWroWY/edit

Fear and Humor Appeal: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tkuyzInn0W9rG1dYN5Jsw0HUnzyp2gzuKHScW2OmhmE/edit

This I No Longer Believe: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uVcVb5IK08TMDXTAwMYDWnE4VTVyXBQUvioTkYYx1Qo/edit

Rhetorical Analysis: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Nt_8svi74RB-q_-NND8w0zNlzBChGEkOS123qm08_VI/edit

Inquiry Paper:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I9t_LtTuwMR5kqFUkhKgD7rlPYFJ-JwcISfqhVSkimk/edit

The reason as to why I chose the assignments above as my greatest achievement. Each individual assignment shows my analysis and growth as a writer. The first unit project: This I No Longer Believe, is about how growing up I thought everything revolved around because that is the way it should be, and but then I go on about how I had an eye opener and changed me as a whole. if it wasn’t for the experience i wouldn’t be here today. Since I moved here everything has been a challenge. No one can see it from my perspective, the first essay tells my origin story and it showcases my learning as well. As for the second unit project: Rhetorical Analysis, it demonstrates my passion for the topic. The topic that I chose was abortions rights. as a woman and a citizen of the U.S and have the right to exclaim my concern about abortion rights. The United States always needs to have two sides to the same coin whether it is about slavery, or industry, and apparently women rights, this essay allowed me to freely express my opinion, not something that previous schools allowed me to. And lastly the third unit project: inquiry paper. The topic that I chose to write about was sugar addiction. Sugar addiction is not talked about enough as it should be, which I believe will cause some concern in the future. And I wanted to share my current concern with my peers. Beside the major assignments I included the fear and humor appeal and romance, sex, gender appeal. For the participation grade these were my favorite overall. 

When this paper was first introduced, I was stumped, I had no idea what I was going to write about. I created a whole list of possibilities. Some of those possibilities were religion, superstition, and my current topic that the world revolves around me. As I was writing, I first needed to think about my traumatic past. Talking or even writing about it was difficult. As I was writing, I wished I had chosen something else, but ultimately I don’t regret my choice. I would do it again. If i had more time i would write a better conclusion, my conclusion felt incomplete and it lacked tone. Similarly to unit 1 project. The rhetorical analysis is my favorite overall. If I could describe the feeling of writing something so passionately I would describe it as eye opening. I always dwelled on writing essays. I dreaded it as I previously mentioned teachers didn’t give much room to grow, and as a person whose native language is not english that was and still is very difficult. I felt liberated to write an essay about my opinion and concern though it might be somewhat biased because it has to do with my woman rights and freedom. I would also like to include that similarly to paper 1 i wasn’t satisfied with my conclusion it could’ve been so much better and if i had written a nice closing conclusion it would’ve tied the paper together. As for Unit 3 project: inquiry paper. The objective is sugar addiction, I came across this topic through social media platform Reddit. Reddit is a social media platform and online news website where registered users can submit content such as text posts, links, images, and videos. Users can also participate in discussions and comment on other people’s submissions. Reddit is known for its strong sense of community and can be a great place to discover new information and have discussions with people who share your interests. People talked about their concern with sugar addiction and there was a debate about whether or not sugar should be considered an addiction in the first place. Being my typical self I spiral into researching sugar addiction. And that is when the plan to write about sugar addiction came about, with this paper I concentrated on facts and data analysis. I felt like a researcher and I also felt like I provided enough information to satisfy any question that may arise, also my conclusion improved. I closed the assignments just like I wanted to.

I previously mentioned that for my Unit 2 project: rhetorical analysis, I didn’t conclude the paper well which made the paper feel incomplete, so I decided to revise it.

revised unit 2 project: Rhetorical Analysis: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15dR0xKQWETgJCPUWePpR57tf_hbd8_hHQlSL_2cepiA/edit