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Title-PSV1

You thought I would fall
but those who know
Oh, they know
Here I stand
Strong and proud
strong and proud
for her

For those who see me
they think momma is weak
But I am a tiger
strong and proud
strong and proud

Can’t no stop me 
For I’m a mother
for her
I am strong and proud
strong and proud 

Responses

  • Arleni Ulloa says:
    Rosie,
    The message of your poem is strong.
    The message conveys pride and leadership.
    I enjoy the message and the flow.

    I would take a look at your last section and double check on the negatives.

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