Title-PSV1
You thought I would fall
but those who know
Oh, they know
Here I stand
Strong and proud
strong and proud
for her
For those who see me
they think momma is weak
But I am a tiger
strong and proud
strong and proud
Can’t no stop me
For I’m a mother
for her
I am strong and proud
strong and proud
The message of your poem is strong.
The message conveys pride and leadership.
I enjoy the message and the flow.
I would take a look at your last section and double check on the negatives.