Metaphor Writing

Rushing and breathing hard
She walked into the building
the sound of her shoes
toc toc toc toc toc
echoed in the lobby
pressing the button with urgency
the elevator growling
now waiting for the elevator
the elevator
stops on each floor

3 lights up
2 lights up
L lights up “ding”
doors open
her eyes looking back
not a sound
she opens the door“ah, finally”
klang, bang
the sound echoes in the lobby

The body falls to the ground
the white and black hexagon floor is now dressed in red
the elevator starts to growl
2 lights up
3 lights up
4 lights up
The crystal blue eyes awakes to the sound of
the sirens

closing her eyes
seeing the bright white and
red lights
hearing the noise
closing and opening her eyes 
like waves in the ocean
coming and going

Men with blue uniforms talking
“she has being hit on the head with a sharp weapon”
the neighbors horrified
Detective Blue says “Her purse is gone, we cannot identify the victim”

A woman screaming
The men in the blue uniforms would not let her come close to the victim
the woman says “ Ma’am please step back?”
the woman replied” Not a bullet in your gun can stop me from seeing my daughter, you step away, my baby is hurt “
The daughter slighlty smiled as the woman held her hand


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