CUNY Academic Commons | Zefyr Lisowski | Activity https://commons.gc.cuny.edu/members/zeflisowski/activity/ Activity feed for Zefyr Lisowski. Sat, 01 Jan 2050 18:00:18 -0500 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 c44e811f5c72f278085ba4dcce31a815 Zefyr Lisowski commented on the post, Poetry Unit 1 Discussion Forum, on the site Fall 2020: Introduction to Creative Writing: Hybridity, Identity, and Getting Weird With It https://lehmanfallcw.commons.gc.cuny.edu/2020/10/07/poetry-unit-1-discussion-forum/#comment-206 Mon, 16 Nov 2020 02:11:30 -0500 Lemesis,
I like a lot here! “Disastrous driveway” is a really great turn of phrase, and I love the contrasts here: “someone was keeping watch over my home and I was an intruder”; “warm”/”coldness”; and more.

I […]

]]> e491ec464becd7b003aa61d025507358 Zefyr Lisowski commented on the post, Ghost Stories, on the site Fall 2020: Introduction to Creative Writing: Hybridity, Identity, and Getting Weird With It https://lehmanfallcw.commons.gc.cuny.edu/2020/11/11/ghost-stories/#comment-205 Mon, 16 Nov 2020 02:00:06 -0500 Kharla,
I also liked this a lot, and have a similar question as Lemesis below! What’s the significance of the ghost’s clothes!

I was wondering about this, too: “I lean closer and, hey, you kind of look […]

]]> 1108054c21aee8b045fb41162ccaea49 Zefyr Lisowski commented on the post, Ghost Stories, on the site Fall 2020: Introduction to Creative Writing: Hybridity, Identity, and Getting Weird With It https://lehmanfallcw.commons.gc.cuny.edu/2020/11/11/ghost-stories/#comment-204 Mon, 16 Nov 2020 01:51:07 -0500 Emani,

This is incredible!! It’s eerie, well-written, and stuck with me after I read it.

I’m wondering if the ending could be clarified a bit more, though! What did Falicia’s ghost going into the bathroom […]

]]> cd91de0c634a00babd924c430f43be25 Zefyr Lisowski commented on the post, Ghost Stories, on the site Fall 2020: Introduction to Creative Writing: Hybridity, Identity, and Getting Weird With It https://lehmanfallcw.commons.gc.cuny.edu/2020/11/11/ghost-stories/#comment-203 Mon, 16 Nov 2020 01:25:23 -0500 Omar,
I really like this! I see echoes of the piece that you wrote during the free write in class, if I remember correctly. The repetition really works well!
I’m wondering what the ending would look like if it […]

]]> da064902ef1857d86da9f7d41767adc6 Zefyr Lisowski wrote a new post on the site Fall 2020: Introduction to Creative Writing: Hybridity, Identity, and Getting Weird With It https://lehmanfallcw.commons.gc.cuny.edu/?p=191 Wed, 11 Nov 2020 17:05:29 -0500 Post your ghost stories here in the comments. As you post, respond to at least one other student’s story, noting something you liked, something you were surprised by, and something you had questions […]

]]> 79d3b2c4d9a07ceed252f44e1cec2f66 Zefyr Lisowski wrote a new post on the site Fall 2020: Introduction to Creative Writing: Hybridity, Identity, and Getting Weird With It https://lehmanfallcw.commons.gc.cuny.edu/?p=174 Wed, 07 Oct 2020 00:07:17 -0400 Write a short response below highlighting something from one of the poems we’ll look at—we’ll use this as a jumping off point to discuss more in class!

]]> 607c46480809166448467b21eaee312b Zefyr Lisowski wrote a new post on the site Fall 2020: Introduction to Creative Writing: Hybridity, Identity, and Getting Weird With It https://lehmanfallcw.commons.gc.cuny.edu/?p=167 Wed, 30 Sep 2020 17:52:19 -0400 -Expression—how you feel about different topics

-A healthy way to express what you’re going through

-Theme (main purpose or main idea—the point you’re trying to get across. Can have one or multiple the […]

]]> 21546941f70ddcb720cbb2c182cb8bcc Zefyr Lisowski wrote a new post on the site Fall 2020: Introduction to Creative Writing: Hybridity, Identity, and Getting Weird With It https://lehmanfallcw.commons.gc.cuny.edu/?p=149 Thu, 03 Sep 2020 20:26:38 -0400 Dear all,

Once you’ve finished reading “For Colored Girls,” I want you to pick one specific quote from the choreopoem to write into and about. Write a paragraph about the quote or a specific element from the […]

]]> 5799402477408c6a8227ff02bbfa2eee Zefyr Lisowski changed their profile picture https://commons.gc.cuny.edu/activity/p/685344/ Tue, 25 Aug 2020 17:47:19 -0400 0056deaed922e7c5f6c403d12578cf70 Zefyr Lisowski wrote a new post on the site Fall 2020: Introduction to Creative Writing: Hybridity, Identity, and Getting Weird With It https://lehmanfallcw.commons.gc.cuny.edu/?p=123 Mon, 17 Aug 2020 17:08:15 -0400 I’m so excited to meet all of you. This website will serve as the class hub; here our class assignments, forums, schedule, syllabus, and discussion are all posted. We’ll go over this next Wednesday, the first day […]

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