I like how you described how it wasn’t that difficult to find your sources, but it would have been interesting to know the the specific sources you found credible to your topic. Also like Richi discussed look i […]
I like how you discussed about looking into Wikipedia, but excluding it because there are editors that usually alter the information. It was interesting to mention that as it shows what you left out in your […]
I like your question as it is quite specific and a current issue now. You discuss for example how your source “Pollution and our oceans” leads to explaining your research question. I would have liked to see the […]
By pointing out that this process of writing first drafts is not only for writers but students as well allowed you to connect to it, because us as students have dealt with the process of writing a really bad draft […]
I really liked how the use of her comparing “shitty first drafts” to a child’s draft really interested you. You describe how you never thought of that comparison, which also happened to me while reading Lamot […]
I like how you connected yourself to the character Keema. It shows that although you were confused with what “18 and 23” meant, you also found a way to connect yourself to story. You connected with Keema, whi […]
I never really thought of observing a train when it is in rush hour. You can find so many interactions, like the group students being very loud, people running down the stairs to the train, people being annoyed, […]
I really like how much you connect to this place you observed, it helps add more of your personal comments when making this observation. You also discuss that in this coffee shop when observing the patterns, the […]
I really liked how you mentioned that she described Solange with so many dramatic words, it sort of helped us create an image of her in our mind. These powerful words had meaning for Mathis to use than just […]
I founded it interesting how you added in Solange’s background information that she distinguished from her sister. You added about about the meaning and interpretations of her songs being about a black woman, how […]
It’s really interesting and important how you explain that this incident and injustice act that police did to these six young black teens still occurs now. There has been a large amount of police brutality that i […]
Its really interesting and I liked how you mentioned that, many black people may have thought that moving to the North, they were gonna experience a freedom they didn’t have in South. Instead they went through t […]
While reading your view of how the president of the American Sociology Society proposed relocating the African American community to South America I was well was shocked. When you explain how it’s the same as h […]
Your summary is smoothly written, especially when you dissect Victor Hugo’s quote. His quote states that a if soul
Is left in the dark no sins will happen, saying that the guilty ones isn’t who commits the sin […]