To prepare for a writing assignment, I always like to have research be done on the topic first. Once being given or choosing a topic, I look into many sources to have information-and if based on a topic of my […]
I, too, always refer to the sample essays provided so that I can better understand the structure the paper has to be written in! I find it beneficial and an important step to helping students better understand […]
Though our time management is completely different, I’m the same in the sense that whatever I’m writing has to be planned out as what my topic is about. have assignments that break down the research for this topic […]
I agree that the paragraph structures are not too long, not making it a bad thing in this case. The writer doesn’t add fluff, and when they’re not directly quoting their sources they’re paraphrasing them, allowing […]
I personally felt the writer could have defined what baggage meant, as it wasn’t a term that could be used literally, but I agree that the essay was interesting and caught my eye based off just the title! Though […]
The essay I chose to review was “How Individual Upbringing Affects Young Adult Romantic Relationships”, which focused on how one’s upbringing influenced the romantic relationships they had later in life. Overall, […]
I agree and genuinely believe in how you said incel’s shared opinions & activities reflect their low self esteem and that this in turn, like the author says, can and does lead to violence being inflicted upon […]
I like that you speak of how the incel community, though one that causes and represents hatred, is one that goes to each other as support-but also acknowledging that not all support is good.
The author, Zach Beauchamp, introduces us with a person who exemplified what an incel originally meant back when the term and community was formed so that we have it as a comparison for what present-day incels […]
When I reflect on my privileges, the one that instantly comes to mind is where I live: Lincoln Center. Whenever I, a hispanic female, tell anyone this there’s always shock & the typical “are you rich” (I’m not […]
I believe that from the beginning to the end of your last paragraph you discovered what personal factors (you being a minority) play in connecting with your online community (you claiming minorities make up most […]
Like you, I acknowledge that having a 2 parent household is a privilege, as a majority of the people I surround myself with have parents that were either never married or were once married but now divorced. I also […]
I like how you noted that Wu started to feel hopeless towards the possibility of recovery upon discovering the community the first forum is intended for despite how it’s initially advertised.
Your response is neatly organized & I like that you went in depth with describing the disorder as well as providing an example not only from the text, but also from the author’s perspective. I think the only thing […]
In her essay, Out Patients, Elise Wu portrays those who have been diagnosed or self diagnosed with a disorder called factitious disorder (FD), with her being among those people. Upon her history of faking severe […]
Though the goal was to see if there was a certain atmosphere within Chinatown due to the racism asian people have received over the outbreak of coronavirus, I respect that you emphasized the error in this behavior […]
Hey I’m doing the trains setting as well! What stood out to me besides your choice setting was of course the virus outbreak, but also how different my experiences have regarding that & people on the train. The […]
An environment I have been in long enough to expect & understand the behaviors that are a part of it are the MTA trains. Typically I, along with many other commuters, will be on our phones listening to music, […]
The article written by Jessica Pressler tells of the experiences of women who went from being strippers to criminal masterminds as they would use their wits & physical attraction to draw in wealthy men-usually […]
The article written by Jessica Pressler tells of the experiences of women who went from being strippers to criminal masterminds as they would use their wits & physical attraction to draw in wealthy men-usually […]