To be honest, I was a little confused about what “18&23″ meant. I had to reread the passage a few more times to get what it was. I also think that “18&23″ is a slang because of how commonly it was used by the tow […]
I love the connection you made with macbecth. I also intended to use Tempest, one of Shakespeare books but I remembered another book that feeted the bill better.
This is very immersive and interesting. The storytelling is interesting, your connections and descriptions are very good and the writing is very ordered. I really like it
you wrote that the laws like the No Knock, Stop and Frisk laws are certainly not directed against anybody else except the black community. this makes me wonder if this law still exists in Harlem today or if other […]
I like that you say police officers don’t care about age. because, regardless of whether you are a middle school child or a grandpa, as long as you are of the minority, to police officers won’t discriminate in […]
I like how you said “To be able to use our studies to adjust the wrongs in society into rights, is something that should’ve been looked into sooner.” it shows how hesitant society was to face the problem.
In his speech, dr. King quoted, “If a soul is left in darkness, sins will be committed. The guilty one is not he who commits the sin but he who causes the darkness.” In other words, the responsibility of “sin” is […]