CUNY Academic Commons | Mentor Mahmuti | Activity https://commons.gc.cuny.edu/members/mentormahmuti77/activity/ Activity feed for Mentor Mahmuti. Sat, 01 Jan 2050 18:00:18 -0500 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 0555af3280fcb546bb5153d662c293c9 Mentor Mahmuti commented on the post, Diss track paragraph!, on the site English Composition 121 https://english121.commons.gc.cuny.edu/2018/10/25/diss-track-paragraph/#comment-2315 Thu, 25 Oct 2018 14:36:41 -0400 In order for your rap battle to be great you should be very lyrical. you should be rhyming a lot and have plenty of bars. For example in the rap battle “No Vaseline” the rapper says “Callin’ me Arnold, but you […]

]]> df77e195db78677d915472676071295f Mentor Mahmuti commented on the post, Analysis of Child's drawing, on the site English Composition 121 https://english121.commons.gc.cuny.edu/2018/09/13/analysis-of-childs-drawing/#comment-2002 Thu, 20 Sep 2018 13:31:00 -0400 Valerie…. a ocean and sand.” -Mentor & Pende

The child’s picture shows a body of water, sand and him laying down. I feel like the little child is thinking about the beach. The child is laying on the […]

]]> 80bf0c953096bbbf601af3d92205fb6a Mentor Mahmuti commented on the post, Summarize your children's book, on the site English Composition 121 https://english121.commons.gc.cuny.edu/2018/09/06/summarize-your-childrens-book/#comment-1806 Thu, 06 Sep 2018 14:25:22 -0400 The little girl has taken great care of her old dog Lulu, but she knows that it is old and ill and soon to die. They buried the dog in the backyard, but the little girl had not said her goodbyes to Lulu for a […]

]]> b98816e7394340d0559a9be5ca8e1078 Mentor Mahmuti commented on the post, Alexander Chee's "The Writing Life", on the site English Composition 121 https://english121.commons.gc.cuny.edu/2018/08/30/alexander-chees-the-writing-life/#comment-1638 Thu, 30 Aug 2018 13:35:34 -0400 Page 54 the Last three paragraphs

This paragraph is saying if you want to make something happen than you must do it repeatedly , you must make it a daily thing, more like a habit. I feel like this means a lot […]

]]> 35f3711d72899be463a404a2feb137d1 Mentor Mahmuti became a registered member https://commons.gc.cuny.edu/activity/p/513632/ Tue, 28 Aug 2018 14:40:33 -0400 c1cd3c8330bdcf193c7f0a4c8ab832ff Mentor Mahmuti commented on the post, Writing Selves, on the site English Composition 121 https://english121.commons.gc.cuny.edu/2018/08/22/writing-selves/#comment-1554 Tue, 28 Aug 2018 14:36:45 -0400 I was in second grade, the end of the school year taking the reading and writing state test, you have a time limit and this was my first year in America so I did not know English that well and definitely didn’t […]

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