I like that you decided to mention the topic question clearly so the reader can know what your sources would be related to. I do agree that for your research you should include all those topics and and need more […]
I agree that this makes writers feel good about writing first drafts. You stated that there are struggles, but that they eventually make our writing better quality which is true.
You were very descriptive in portraying the writing style of the author of “Mama Day”. I also feel like Reema’s boy was a character that stood out because of the way that he would observe throughout the text and […]
I think you did good in actually connecting certain texts to “Mama Day” and describing your past experiences. Also , it was smart to mention how at first you didn’t understand the meaning of 18 and 23 and after […]
Your observation was descriptive and truly makes the reader feel like they are at Popeyes. The description of the smells and your overall experience up to the end were well written.
I like that you included a lot of details when describing the pumpkin patch and even went to include numbers like on how many people were there or how many pictures were taken. Your choice to do the observation at […]
It’s true that the background information given about Solange truly led her to the person she is today. From her childhood to adulthood it is now seen that based from her views and experiences she represents her […]
I agree with the descriptions of the album cover making Solange come to life. It’s true that the way she dressed, her character can pop out more and come to life. In doing so, we can see a more positive view of […]
It truly is a tragical story how Frank Stafford was treated. All he did was question why the police officers were beating up a kid and then he became the victim.This action wasn’t justified, as he hadn’t done […]
I agree with the thought that the action of beating them up lacked humanity. Negroes were truly treated as animals and in no way should they have been harmed for no reason. Police officers were acting like […]
Your summary was well written and really discussed the issues that were mentioned by the text. It’s interesting to see that you described the connection between the Vietnam War and the Civil Rights Movement.
I think you did a good job in giving a summary about the text. You included a lot of details and included many of the key points that the text used. The idea that interests you really is shocking. I agree with the […]