I also wrote about this essay and I would disagree, despite the author’s grammatical errors I felt like the author did provide insight and planned the structure of her essay.
Overall the essay, “Who Needs Feminism When You Have Femininity?” by Folake Famuyiwa had a clear structure, it was coherent and well organized. I liked the hook she chose to include because it was a good […]
Good job explaining the trends and patterns amongst the group. Identifying the type of people in the group is important to the goals of the group. Stating that in this incel community the demographic is primarily […]
I think the way you addressed how women were a “target for the group was the best way to explain their treatment of women in the group. Also, I completely agree with your comment about Incel being a “pity party.”
The specific patterns or trends that the author notes about the members of incel or “involuntary celibacy” are the reasons for joining the group, how the members share an age range, and the language in their ‘cu […]
I think you connected your privileges and subjective views and your online community very well. Your post was very candid, intersubjective, and thorough with sharing your experiences and opinions.
I like how you address not only your privileges but connect them to the people that follow “hypebeast” culture and other forms of trends that focus on materialism can be wealthy and others not so much. What makes […]
My reasons for choosing the online community of Bernie Sanders supporters because it is very relevant considering that we are only 7 months away from our next presidential election. I am not into politics that […]
I appreciated how clear you structured your response and I like how you included Wu’s language such as “those they played for.” Great job including how Wu’s notes helped you understand the essay.
Your response clearly shows how Wu uses her personal experiences to strengthen her essay. I like how straightforward and concise your answers are as well.
The online community Wu is trying to portray are people diagnosed or self-diagnosed with factitious disorder. The text begins Wu describing how she felt while faking appendicitis symptoms: she “let his gentle w […]
I liked your descriptions of the restaurant environment and how you analyzed the customers. Comparing the small Korean spot which was most likely a family own business I am assuming to the fancier ones in the city […]
I enjoyed your post and the imagery captivated in your descriptions of the water. I also liked how to describe the building and used personification to describe the building “touching” the clouds. Nice job.
Walking into the McDonald’s on 125th and Saint Nicholas the smell of fries and apple pie ran into my nostrils causing my mouth to water. I had been craving a cheeseburger a […]