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Andrew Mark Salmieri replied to the topic Discussion Forum: “Reading Games: Strategies for Reading...” (DUE 10/26) in the forum Writing Resistance - Fall 2020

Tue, 27 Oct 2020 03:29:48 -0400

In “Reading Games: Strategies for Reading Scholar Sources”, Karen Rosenberg discusses the different techniques we can use to approach and read scholarly sources. It may be difficult for college students to really grasp a scholarly article sometimes, but Rosenberg addresses that with effective tools which can be employed to gather information and…[Read more]

Andrew Salmieri commented on the post, Essay #2 Report on Research in Progress, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020)

Tue, 27 Oct 2020 03:16:32 -0400

You have an excellent range of sources. Additionally, you have researched your sources very well and seem to have a grip on your research. I appreciate you putting so much effort into this topic. Best of luck on […]

Andrew Salmieri commented on the post, Essay #2 Report on Research in Progress, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020)

Tue, 27 Oct 2020 03:14:16 -0400

I find your topic to be really interesting! Your source, “The Problem With American Education” by Marvin C. Zastrow was particularly interesting due to the way it addressed educational inequity through e […]

Andrew Salmieri commented on the post, Essay #2-Research Topic Proposal, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020)

Mon, 19 Oct 2020 17:43:12 -0400

You’re work so far is extremely strong. You seem to have everything together and just have to write the essay at this point. I feel that the economic anxiety brought on by the pandemic has definitely caused a […]

Andrew Salmieri commented on the post, ESSAY #2 RESEARCH PROPOSAL, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020)

Mon, 19 Oct 2020 17:38:01 -0400

I really appreciate you choosing the topic of mental health for your essay. For some people, it is hard to understand the stress and competition that college students face. We are trying to juggle college […]

Andrew Salmieri commented on the post, Essay #2-Research Topic Reflection, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020)

Mon, 12 Oct 2020 18:52:54 -0400

The amount of thought you put into this topic is very much evident in the questions you posed in this reflection. You are certainly on the right path. I feel like the crime rates have went up during COVID-19 […]

Andrew Salmieri commented on the post, Essay #2-Research Topic Reflection, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020)

Mon, 12 Oct 2020 18:46:01 -0400

and how it is up to each state tp administer their education*

Andrew Salmieri commented on the post, Essay #2-Research Topic Reflection, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020)

Mon, 12 Oct 2020 18:45:19 -0400

I second Miranda’s sentiments. There are a lot of inequalities that are present in the American education system. I feel like it has a lot to do with the decentralized nature of our system and it is up to each […]

Andrew Salmieri commented on the post, Essay #1 Reflection, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020)

Tue, 06 Oct 2020 04:00:18 -0400

I have the same issue of repeating myself. Ughhhh, it’s so hard to overcome. Not repeating yourself in a rhetorical analysis is even harder when each component of it is trying to dissect what exactly an author is […]

Andrew Salmieri commented on the post, Essay #1 Reflection, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020)

Tue, 06 Oct 2020 03:57:10 -0400

Haseeb, I second your view that writing is a mechanism through which we can freely express ourselves. I somewhat alluded to that in my response. I respect that you admitted your shortcomings and admire you for […]

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