CUNY Academic Commons | Alice Liu | Activity https://commons.gc.cuny.edu/members/aliceliu/activity/ Activity feed for Alice Liu. Sat, 01 Jan 2050 18:00:18 -0500 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 67489af1fd5c5a7ba2cd4659385d076f Alice Liu created the site Writings To You https://commons.gc.cuny.edu/activity/p/728333/ Fri, 11 Dec 2020 22:03:17 -0500 c50a876ed5c65037a8c12f78394725bf Alice Liu commented on the post, Essay #2: Report on Research in Progress, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020) https://resistance2020.commons.gc.cuny.edu/essay-2-report-on-research-in-progress-2/#comment-308 Sun, 25 Oct 2020 17:16:38 -0400 Hi Marat, I think it’s great that you are eliminating sources and deciding what sources to use based on the information content it provides to your essay. I also really liked how you kind of summarized each of the […]

]]> 48b20cd7123afee68205f095e75a9790 Alice Liu commented on the post, ESSAY #2 REPORT ON RESEARCH IN PROGRESS, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020) https://resistance2020.commons.gc.cuny.edu/essay-2-report-on-research-in-progress-3/#comment-307 Sun, 25 Oct 2020 17:03:40 -0400 Hi Elena, good sources you have so far! As for the source that you are currently debating, I think you should use it if it brings new information that your other sources don’t provide and if it would benefit your […]

]]> 64e65735461ca1c8171b066a9d512365 Alice Liu wrote a new blog post ESSAY #2: Report on Research in Progress in the group Writing Resistance – Fall 2020 https://resistance2020.commons.gc.cuny.edu/essay-2-report-on-research-in-progress/ Thu, 22 Oct 2020 20:35:05 -0400 Each of my sources was found when I found an article stating the different reasons (policy reasons) why there is a significant wealth gap between white and black Americans. They stated key words such as, “The N […]

]]> a57a6682774f723f4b5c425a4ba0128e Alice Liu replied to the topic Discussion Forum: “Reading Games: Strategies for Reading...” (DUE 10/26) in the forum Writing Resistance - Fall 2020 https://commons.gc.cuny.edu/?p=100949 Thu, 22 Oct 2020 18:10:41 -0400 In the article, “Reading Games: Strategies for Reading Scholar Sources” by Karen Rosenberg, Rosenberg gives us advice on how we can approach a scholarly article for our sources when it comes to analyzing and gathering information, which embodies the statement that Rosenberg makes, which is to read smarter, not harder. The idea that interests me is…[Read more]

]]> ab570fd374fc7cf5d6d2caef519e8fa6 Alice Liu commented on the post, Essay #2 Research Proposal, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020) https://resistance2020.commons.gc.cuny.edu/essay-2-research-proposal-4/#comment-279 Tue, 20 Oct 2020 00:08:28 -0400 With divorce rates on the rise, I’m glad your focusing and diving into how divorce impacts the children. I know that divorce has long-term effects on the children, and I’m interested to learn what are the possible […]

]]> ba179ce0a60c04fb70f3ee9b5a0f16d0 Alice Liu commented on the post, ESSAY #2 RESEARCH PROPOSAL, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020) https://resistance2020.commons.gc.cuny.edu/essay-2-research-proposal-5/#comment-278 Tue, 20 Oct 2020 00:05:18 -0400 Bullying is an important issue that is prevalent in a school setting, and no matter how much we spread anti-stop bullying messages, unfortunately, bullying is still going on. I’m interested to learn about what are […]

]]> b6c47d8ca3f1ed1c0eb21ece08bb5ac2 Alice Liu wrote a new blog post Essay #2: Research Proposal in the group Writing Resistance – Fall 2020 https://resistance2020.commons.gc.cuny.edu/essay-2-research-proposal-6/ Mon, 19 Oct 2020 23:48:43 -0400 RESEARCH QUESTION: How do the laws and policies of the United States government contribute to the wealth gap between black and white Americans?

My initial research question combined the two topics of racism and […]

]]> 15bc2e20030b0f5c90308fb02bd0f254 Alice Liu wrote a new blog post Essay #2: Research Topic Reflection in the group Writing Resistance – Fall 2020 https://resistance2020.commons.gc.cuny.edu/essay-2-research-topic-reflection-3/ Sat, 10 Oct 2020 02:07:32 -0400 The question that my research paper will be based on is “How does racial inequality and poverty correlate with one another?” I started off wanting to analyze the topic of poverty, especially because many peo […]

]]> 108a41045406a6119cea000d2b279589 Alice Liu commented on the post, Essay #2 Research Topic Reflection, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020) https://resistance2020.commons.gc.cuny.edu/essay-2-research-topic-reflection/#comment-219 Sat, 10 Oct 2020 01:55:28 -0400 I think that it is great that you’re shedding a light on the issue of rape and your research question is unique considering how I’ve never heard of someone approaching the topic of rape this way. However, I do […]

]]> 1ad7a407074b5845fa7fd88c749245f7 Alice Liu commented on the post, Essay #2 - Research Topic Reflection, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020) https://resistance2020.commons.gc.cuny.edu/essay-2-research-topic-reflection-2/#comment-218 Sat, 10 Oct 2020 01:45:53 -0400 I’m really glad your exploring this topic, especially a topic that all if not many of us can relate to. I agree that college is a very traditional step that everybody thinks that everybody should do after […]

]]> 045fd51b660078daaeadd4f17cdf30f7 Alice Liu commented on the post, Essay #1 Reflection, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020) https://resistance2020.commons.gc.cuny.edu/essay-1-reflection-2/#comment-191 Mon, 05 Oct 2020 16:31:53 -0400 I agree with your method and the idea that feedback is essential to make an essay better. I had readers who read my essay and they helped me realize that the structure you did in your 1st draft, was to redundant […]

]]> f72b3e2c9bb74e42a9b8f921f21a5ee1 Alice Liu commented on the post, Essay #1 Reflection, on the groupblog ENGL 110: Freshman Composition (Fall 2020) https://resistance2020.commons.gc.cuny.edu/essay-1-reflection-5/#comment-190 Mon, 05 Oct 2020 16:16:59 -0400 I also agree with the fact that writing something like a rhetorical analysis does leave one person drained because when writing a rhetorical analysis essay, it’s such an intricate process of analyzing and […]

]]> 6009fcaa43b8e158cd7f19abb4a738c4 Alice Liu wrote a new blog post Rhetorical Essay: Reflection in the group Writing Resistance – Fall 2020 https://resistance2020.commons.gc.cuny.edu/rhetorical-essay-reflection/ Mon, 05 Oct 2020 16:05:56 -0400 I believe that writing is a very complicated process. It was not easy making a good essay that would help me get an A in this assignment. I also felt like researching the articles was also an intricate process […]

]]> 6bbe1825a204467c892b4d9eec52a214 Alice Liu became a registered member https://commons.gc.cuny.edu/activity/p/686599/ Thu, 27 Aug 2020 05:14:11 -0400 aab2a431169aa5bea6ffb17075f52096 Alice Liu wrote a new post on the site Writings To You https://writingstoyou.commons.gc.cuny.edu/?p=1 Thu, 18 Oct 2018 23:18:27 -0400 This website is a collection of my works from English 11000 Freshman Composition class, which is lead by Professor Shamecca Harris. In the class, we learned to write a Source-Based Essay, an Inquiry-Based Research […]

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