CUNY Academic Commons | Ashley Fernandez | Activity https://commons.gc.cuny.edu/members/afernan012/activity/ Activity feed for Ashley Fernandez. Sat, 01 Jan 2050 18:00:18 -0500 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 4632ad43b80d685bdd890d7d13009039 Ashley Fernandez commented on the post, "Shitty First Drafts" discussion post by Anthony Fernandez, on the site Writing for the Social Sciences https://fieldworking.commons.gc.cuny.edu/shitty-first-drafts-discussion-post-by-anthony-fernandez/#comment-380 Mon, 28 Oct 2019 03:14:18 -0400 I very much agreed with you when you mentioned how your mind should be at peace when writing just because distractions would never make the writing good, I forgot about this piece in the article until I read your post.

]]> c93c49936e5bbcde21607ab85084f093 Ashley Fernandez commented on the post, "Shitty First Drafts" Discussion -Loreidy Taveras, on the site Writing for the Social Sciences https://fieldworking.commons.gc.cuny.edu/shitty-first-drafts-discussion-loreidy-taveras/#comment-379 Mon, 28 Oct 2019 03:11:37 -0400 I like how you included your own experience in writing a first draft. I do agree that the main idea of the article was straight forward and clear. However, what might have been something you didn’t really catch u […]

]]> 3b9f8b2f859c07072f806b42da854dcc Ashley Fernandez commented on the post, Response to "Mama Day" by Carla Garcia, on the site Writing for the Social Sciences https://fieldworking.commons.gc.cuny.edu/response-to-mama-day-by-carla-garcia/#comment-328 Mon, 21 Oct 2019 05:11:46 -0400 I understand your confusion towards the passage and I hope that by your second reading it would have made more sense to you. I like how this is a summary of the passage but I wanna hear more about your feelings […]

]]> 5276a9e51af6e455f1299fcdb15a6b72 Ashley Fernandez commented on the post, Laundromat: Non-participant observation (Discussion Post #4)- by Johanni Valerio, on the site Writing for the Social Sciences https://fieldworking.commons.gc.cuny.edu/laundromat-non-participant-observation-discussion-post-4-by-johanni-valerio/#comment-233 Sun, 06 Oct 2019 20:12:39 -0400 First things first, I love the detail you put into this. You included color tiles and even the scents that came to you. The beginning was necessary so that the reader understood how observant you were being so I […]

]]> 10ea2b902e2b980ebf86d190de1affa6 Ashley Fernandez commented on the post, Post #4- Kendry Ortiz, on the site Writing for the Social Sciences https://fieldworking.commons.gc.cuny.edu/post-4/#comment-232 Sun, 06 Oct 2019 20:04:38 -0400 I love the location that you picked considering that I chose to right about my church as well. I liked how you distinguished the difference between gospel and worldly music and how it made you feel. However, I […]

]]> 39a83b5d087c801283c6210189a8417c Ashley Fernandez commented on the post, Solange Response (Angelic Ramrattan), on the site Writing for the Social Sciences https://fieldworking.commons.gc.cuny.edu/solange-response-angelic-ramrattan/#comment-180 Wed, 18 Sep 2019 11:49:43 -0400 I like how you covered all the assignment questions all in one paragraph in a non direct way. I feel like that’s the way answers should be given in paragraphs not just straightforward. I agree with the idea that t […]

]]> 164612bae368436cab67c3e967a96f89 Ashley Fernandez commented on the post, Solange Response (Loreidy Taveras), on the site Writing for the Social Sciences https://fieldworking.commons.gc.cuny.edu/solange-response-loreidy-taveras/#comment-179 Wed, 18 Sep 2019 11:34:52 -0400 I liked how you formed your paragraphs into three to point out where each answer to the three questions are and where we can find them. I also like the idea that the author uses dramatic words to describe Solange […]

]]> f739cf3acbbf0b659e38a8c861148f2e Ashley Fernandez commented on the post, Baldwin Response (Max Garcia), on the site Writing for the Social Sciences https://fieldworking.commons.gc.cuny.edu/baldwin-response-max-garcia/#comment-109 Wed, 11 Sep 2019 11:36:04 -0400 I thought it was clever of you to introduce the article in detail to its main plot. Your questions connect very well with the article and the mind of a fieldworker.

]]> ad9308c9889e54d8f18b9457947abffe Ashley Fernandez commented on the post, Baldwin's Post by Loreidy Taveras, on the site Writing for the Social Sciences https://fieldworking.commons.gc.cuny.edu/baldwins-post-by-loreidy-taveras/#comment-108 Wed, 11 Sep 2019 11:34:16 -0400 I found it interesting how you mentioned the grammatical errors that were fixed in the text. I didn’t pay much mind to it until you said it and now I wonder if it was also done on purpose. Your questions seemed v […]

]]> 5e18626e013c56dd0b73eb1a9506e65c Ashley Fernandez commented on the post, Summary and Analysis of M.L.K's Speech., on the site Writing for the Social Sciences https://fieldworking.commons.gc.cuny.edu/summary-and-analysis-of-m-l-ks-speech/#comment-16 Thu, 05 Sep 2019 03:15:13 -0400 I found myself agreeing with you tremendously on your second paragraph. I also found the date of the speech interesting and quit different. I understood what you believe this article was about right away thanks to […]

]]> 7a219a7977929270afadeb1a10977f4b Ashley Fernandez commented on the post, MLK Summary & Analysis, on the site Writing for the Social Sciences https://fieldworking.commons.gc.cuny.edu/mlk-summary-analysis/#comment-14 Thu, 05 Sep 2019 03:10:44 -0400 I love the way you used your citation to support the “main idea” of the article. Not only that, you explained it and connected the two very well. I’m also a huge fan of your second paragraph and I agree one hundr […]

]]> 2997becae20e8243fd0fa379cabf1e59 Ashley Fernandez became a registered member https://commons.gc.cuny.edu/activity/p/564060/ Wed, 06 Mar 2019 19:15:19 -0500