Profile 2 Reflection

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I feel that that my second college paper had a significant improvement from the first.  I took advantage of the writing center along with my professor’s notes to edit my paper in a conference.  In both of these settings, I was given valuable tools to help me improve my paper.  I enjoyed writing this paper a lot more than the first one due to its more technical nature.  It is my firm belief that it is easier to write an informative paper than to write one about yourself.  I also enjoy history so having the opportunity to do a profile on a historical figure was very enjoyable for me.

In my first paper, I struggled with repeating phrases and words creating redundant points.  Varying my sentence structure was also something that I failed to be proficient at.  With my professor’s notes and my visit to the writing center, I feel that I was able to correct this problem to make my second paper a lot more effective and  concise.